dear all

my apologies
a hodge podge of instructions,
and technical errors
seem to have caused a panic....

i had this week all planned -
but this happened and frankly - was not prepared for it

really sorry - i confused u and myself

am still having fever so i don know if i will be back on thursday
but this is what i would like all of you to do this week

FIRST PRINT OUT A COPY OF THE PRELIM ESSAYS (AGED.COC)

1 i have put up readings for weekS 7 to 10 on ivle - read these articles and pick out 1 or 2 egs or main points - see if you could use them to respond to any of the questions in the prelim essay

2 collect readings on conflict and read, underline...so you could present to me
the main points of the articles...i have not read them so you will enlighten me :)

3 i am slowly putting up the better essays in the prelim essay folder...please do read and take note of the comments

4 s415 - i will not be marking your thesis statements so could you look at the sample i have provided...

please use this period for revision...i am still marking essays
and you are making the same mistakes that i have repeatedly told you not to make
and some of you - grammar is unacceptable - u really need to read and work a lot harder...u should know who you are by now

you need to beef up on your content