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risks dangers threats problems

for AQ the passage mentioned heath problems and terrorism

and yet when you attempted the aq, you mentioned these two when the world is beset with problems galore!!

political - war, terrorism, instability, corruption
economic - stock market, recession, exploitation, affluence related problems
social - natural disasters values challenged dwindling importance of religion
science and related prolems family and related prolems

to reiterate

an example is meant to get a point across
the example is not the point


many of you forget to explain why.....

when you say the disabled need protection
you need to mention what type of protection
who can do it; why it is needed;
then for evaluation mention that we must be careful not to
over - protect to the extent that family members do not need to bear responsibility